
by Angela Cerrito
Today we found a fort
beside the river
You rushed to explore
I asked if you thought it
was the work of teenagers
“No, someone old made this,”
you said
poking your head out
"There’s a smoking pipe
from the olden days
inside
the kind with a water bowl.”
You tugged off your shoes
and eyed the water
“Whoever it is, must be
Over fifty,”
You concluded
“No one smokes with those
Anymore.”
I watched you leap
from rock to rock
and realized
that I am standing
On a bridge
and treading water
at the same time
I don’t regret
that your discovery
didn’t lead us to
another talk about drugs
I love this moment
and the possibility
that a bong
could really be
an ancient relic
from another time
It is such a
short bridge
before us
from almost twelve
to teenager
and I want
to pay close attention
and cherish
every step.

6 comments:
This is very touching. My son is almost 21...how I would love to have some of these moments back...
I love the way you turn a bong into something innocent...all in the eyes of the beholder...
Great job!
Lilfix (Blueboarder)
Oh Angela, I hope that innocence is able to last a while. And yet it is sad too that your child knew that "no one smokes with those anymore."
I love this poem. I am so naive myself that I didn't get it was a "bong" until you mentioned the word! I was right there with her.
My oldest is 10...almost 11. Thanks for reminding me to keep it simple and not make everything a "discussion"!
Wow.
Powerful stuff, Angela. And, boy, the placing of your line breaks is perfect--read it out loud-
Deb
Brenda, Bish, Donna, Deb
Glad you guys liked the poem...
& Happy Mother's Day
oooooh! Love the pic. How could you NOT write a poem about that? GREAT JOB!
And a happy belated Mother's day to you too!
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